Y// Leaves And Waves Poem by Aufie Zophy

Y// Leaves And Waves

Rating: 4.7

Through the leafy bed of the shrubs and trees
I can see the wild waves running on the seas

The leaves of shrubs, the things we do or say
The leaves of trees, our thoughts, day by day

The wonderful breaking waves of the sea
the Love that is always there for you and me

Most of the things that we think, say or do
Have been already thought, said or done
But love is forever there and always new
Never been seen in any of the days bygone

If the leaves are too dense and too much
we cannot experience the waves as such


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Bachok,27.11.2015
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Friday, November 27, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love,love and life
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
The leaves of shrubs and trees tend to beautify a picture of the waves of the sea. What we do, say and think beautifies the Love with capital L. However if we say, do and think too much the Love, our biggest reason for living, may be hidden forever. Sometimes we have to make it still and silent, to fully experience the Love

{Inspired by a song of Toon Hermans}
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Joseph Anderson 14 January 2016

Aufie-A extremely beautiful poem of love and reverence and it is in sonnet form which I dearly love. Splendid rhyme and smooth flow makes this a poem to read many times-10

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Hazel Durham 01 December 2015

To be free in thought and spirit when we're in love is the true essence of love, not to want to control but to trust and allow freedom like the wildness of the waves to embrace both our souls! Stunning write!

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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 28 November 2015

Verily, a good similitude of life and waves to leaves and shrubs.

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Shakil Ahmed 27 November 2015

Most of the things that we think, say or do Have been already thought, said or done But love is always there and always new Never been seen in any of the days bygone - - Beautiful lines well composed poem,

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Seema Chowdhury 27 November 2015

But love is always there and always new...... So true, a nice and an honest write.

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