Y/ Paradise Poem by Aufie Zophy

Nice straightforward write of what it will take to get rid of hate and live in paradise. But as you say we do not bother to take the time, hence I agree, will lead to our demise.

We are a long way from Paradise, a very long way, ..... Good one Aufie.

Ethereal to live here as paradise, but great to try...and it never wrong to do....Paradise on earth is can be here when hearts of people be the stars that shine love and its magical beat to unify all livings and souls as one body_Soul

Well penned, and correct, thanks for sharing.

So very true Hans. A good poem, I like it

Yes, it starts from the heart.....to some, even a humble abode is paradise! To others, a palace a prison.

we send out our best thoughts to all the world. nice

best write. we the poets are trying to make it parsdise n o hope it wil not go invain. thnx for sharing

A message of kindness and compassion, if we practise the world would be a paradise like Eden above.

Love is the important factor of life, but it gets dismissed during pursuit of temporary pleasures..Good poem..