Y// Scary Perfect World Poem by Aufie Zophy

Y// Scary Perfect World

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People deny the existence of God
based on cruelty displayed on TV.
If He'd be good, power He'd have not.
If He'd have power, how evil He'd be?

The answer lies according to me
in imagining a perfect world.
How awfully scary would it be
to live in a perfect world?

By whatever we do or act.
It'd become less perfect

Creativity, motivation,
lending a hand to a person in need
Charity, helpfulness, inspiration
all suddenly absolutely obsolete.

Can we imagine how dull it would be
to live if all was perfectly nice.
Animalistic indulgence for you and me
In an extremely boring paradise.

Somehow we were given the power of creativity,
we were allowed to co-create something nice
Somehow we have power to think with positivity
to love and help and make self-sacrifice

These things give us perfect peace of mind
We get that feeling of happiness, so great
Through being loving, helping and kind
Admit it, that is just how we were made
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Wednesday, December 30, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: creativity,god,perfection
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I love the world.
I think a perfect world would be extremely scary...
We may not understand everything
But if God would have made a perfect world
We would be just like puppies
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valsa George 01 January 2016

Light becomes more visible in darkness! We appreciate our robust health more when we fall sick! In the same way goodness is appreciated more against wickedness. A perfect world is first of all utopean, more than that it will be boring and dull. When there is sorrow and joy, sacrifice and sharing, life becomes more colorful. Wise observations! Wish you a great 2016 of all blessings!

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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 10 January 2016

Verily, God has made the world a diverse and ambiguous one with a definite purpose behind

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Terry Craddock 04 January 2017

We Are Meant To Sing Beautiful Life Songs like birds we are meant to fly free our souls never confined caged like birds we sing beautiful songs Copyright © Terence George Craddock Inspired by the poem 'Y/. A Small Bird' by the poet Aufie Zophy. Dedicated to the poet Aufie Zophy.

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Terry Craddock 04 January 2017

Especially Especially When Lived Life Generously creativity charity motivates kindness blessings a mantra, a prayer of blessing, when prayed, especially especially when lived life generously Copyright © Terence George Craddock Inspired by the poem 'Y// Scary Perfect World' by the poet Aufie Zophy. Dedicated to the poet Aufie Zophy.

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Terry Craddock 03 January 2017

'Creativity, motivation, lending a hand to a person in need Charity, helpfulness, inspiration all suddenly absolutely obsolete.' a mantra, a prayer of blessing, when prayed, especially especially when lived generiously

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Joseph Anderson 20 January 2016

God gave us the freedom to choose. The rest is up to us. You have presented some thought provoking statements for us all in this scary unperfect world. This is a very splendid poser of a poem

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Hazel Durham 13 January 2016

I agree a perfect world would be so boring, to learn we have to make our own mistakes, life is wonderful it is always a learning curve to improve ourselves and to help and to love each other. A very interesting write and thought provoking!

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