Y.. Simple Poem by Aufie Zophy

Y.. Simple

Rating: 5.0


It's so simple, rough acts boost our ego,
but trouble our soul, trouble our life
Nice and kind acts boost our soul
and will lead to peace of mind

It's so simple, rough words boost our ego
but trouble our soul, trouble our life
Nice and kind words boost our soul
and will lead to peace of mind

It's so simple, rough thoughts boost our ego
but trouble our soul, trouble our life
Nice and kind thoughts boost our soul
and will lead to peace of mind

It is really that simple, we always have the choice
It is just a very true fact of life
Just think about the last time you acted, talked, thought rough
Just think about the last time you acted, talked, thought nice

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
K .w 21 October 2011

Very good poem i love it!

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Richard McClellan 21 October 2011

Very nice poem. You should read my poem called 'Choices'

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Eric Cockrell 22 October 2011

compaasion is as compassion does... in every movement of life! good thinking here!

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Miriam Maia Padua 24 October 2011

you have a very nice concept.. interesting to read....a soul searching piece... thanks for sharing

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Spiritual Seeker 01 November 2011

Poems towards goodness and spiritual uplifting! ...may every dropp of your precious ink and effort be many times rewarded...! ! ! A great 10. Kindly comment on my 'The Passing Time'. TQ

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Walterrean Salley 30 October 2011

Very thought provoking, and mirrors the truth. A good 'rule of thumb' by which to live. Very good. Thank you.

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Ency Bearis 29 October 2011

Brilliant write, pleasure to read with such inspiring message.

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Malaya Roses 29 October 2011

Power of choice and we walk the talk.... concept of no rhetoric but more on practice. The poet is always green with new approach of common thinking. Each stanza relates to simple conclusion; each word spoken, consequence is always there. Excellent! ! !

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Elena Sandu 25 October 2011

Yes true, being nice and kind brings a little light into our hearts. Yes it is a choise. Good poem how I would love to be all the time nice and kind.. Thank you for share I loved the message of this poem,10

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