Aufie Zophy

Gold Star - 8,106 Points (18 October 1964)

Y..... The Balloon - Poem by Aufie Zophy

I went to the sea of love, this noon
I took it and put it in a blue balloon

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Poet's Notes about The Poem

A small poem dedicated to my lovely wife

Comments about Y..... The Balloon by Aufie Zophy

  • Dutendra Chamling Dutendra Chamling (11/25/2015 3:48:00 AM)

    Beautiful love poem...............! (Report) Reply

    3 person liked.
    1 person did not like.
  • Akhtar Jawad Akhtar Jawad (1/9/2015 8:30:00 AM)

    You reminded me of two lines from an Urdu poet, Jigar Muradabadi- - - -
    Ek lafz-e-muhabbat ka adna yeh fasana hay Simte to dil-e-aashiq phaile to zamana hay
    (It's a short story of the word love, when converges becomes heart of a lover. when diverges becomes an universe. A great poem...................10 (Report) Reply

  • Sankar Sehanabis Sankar Sehanabis (10/24/2014 3:12:00 AM)

    Awesome! A nice romantic poem. (Report) Reply

  • Viti Kumaar (9/17/2014 12:11:00 AM)

    Such a cute, lovely poem... :) Wonderfully written! (Report) Reply

  • Aftab Alam Khursheed Aftab Alam Khursheed (9/7/2014 11:40:00 AM)

    awesome so so so sweet Auie sea of love, to never end ..Amen (Report) Reply

  • Francis Wanyiri (5/6/2014 4:16:00 AM)

    awesome piece. I enjoyed. please check out my works too. Thanks (Report) Reply

  • * Sunprincess * (3/22/2014 8:55:00 PM)

    ............beautifully written with lots of loves.. (Report) Reply

  • Ken E Hall (10/23/2012 4:26:00 AM)

    A perfect way to end in a sea of love transported in a blue balloon fairy tale ending for true love...regards (Report) Reply

  • Nader Baheri Nader Baheri (10/22/2012 10:45:00 AM)

    so romantically piece of written.
    tnx for sharing (Report) Reply

  • Eindaray Kyaw Eindaray Kyaw (10/19/2012 4:22:00 AM)

    Yes..I do agree with Ellias..the balloon in your poem is so amazing! (Report) Reply

  • Ellias Anderson Jr. Ellias Anderson Jr. (10/17/2012 8:41:00 AM)

    This balloon must be a perfect experiment. and it shows that how kind and sweet you are to your wife
    well done dear (Report) Reply

  • S.zaynub Kamoonpuri S.zaynub Kamoonpuri (10/17/2012 7:12:00 AM)

    Wow super cool poem with love burstin balloon! Enjoyd soo much. I hope u read my other cments. Thanx 4 yors. (Report) Reply

  • Yash Shinde Yash Shinde (10/16/2012 9:23:00 AM)

    so beautiful sir loved your style short and is simply elegant in its simplicity (Report) Reply

  • Ramesh Rai Ramesh Rai (10/16/2012 8:50:00 AM)

    I agree with you sea of love has no end that you have been able to pick up. master write. (Report) Reply

  • Valsa George Valsa George (10/14/2012 11:30:00 PM)

    I visualize the balloon bursting with a prick, letting out a sea of love for the whole world to bathe in! ! Wonderful imagination! ! (Report) Reply

  • Joseph Anderson (10/14/2012 3:42:00 PM)

    A great metaphor for love-simplisticly beautiful and I love your brevity in creating this-
    Wow! would not any wife appreciate this (Report) Reply

  • Elena Sandu Elena Sandu (10/14/2012 8:24:00 AM)

    I love this poem, it's more than a ten! Sweet and very relaxing, soothing! Swimming into a blue sea of love, now, thank you! (Report) Reply

  • Smoky Hoss (10/11/2012 1:06:00 PM)

    Such sweet poetic words, wonderful! (Report) Reply

  • Neela Nath Das Neela Nath Das (10/9/2012 7:14:00 AM)

    So nice! A beautiful poem on love.Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Unwritten Soul Unwritten Soul (10/8/2012 2:43:00 PM)

    Inside the ballon
    the crimson feelings swirl
    the love filled inside it,
    let it goes high will never fall
    never less than sky tall
    climb the air toward the end
    and the sea of love will reach it
    but if it explode one day
    we all will never dry again
    showered by the love eternally
    By our red balloon as a serene moon
    ...continuity inspired by Hans_Soul (Report) Reply

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