Aufie Zophy

Silver Star - 3,456 Points (18 October 1964)

Y..... The Balloon - Poem by Aufie Zophy

I went to the sea of love, this noon
I took it and put it in a blue balloon

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Poet's Notes about The Poem

A small poem dedicated to my lovely wife

Comments about Y..... The Balloon by Aufie Zophy

  • Gold Star - 37,976 Points Akhtar Jawad (1/9/2015 8:30:00 AM)

    You reminded me of two lines from an Urdu poet, Jigar Muradabadi- - - -
    Ek lafz-e-muhabbat ka adna yeh fasana hay Simte to dil-e-aashiq phaile to zamana hay
    (It's a short story of the word love, when converges becomes heart of a lover. when diverges becomes an universe. A great poem...................10 (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 245 Points Sankar Sehanabis (10/24/2014 3:12:00 AM)

    Awesome! A nice romantic poem. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 36 Points Viti Kumaar (9/17/2014 12:11:00 AM)

    Such a cute, lovely poem... :) Wonderfully written! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 39,822 Points Aftab Alam Khursheed (9/7/2014 11:40:00 AM)

    awesome so so so sweet Auie sea of love, to never end ..Amen (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 66 Points Francis Wanyiri (5/6/2014 4:16:00 AM)

    awesome piece. I enjoyed. please check out my works too. Thanks (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 21,957 Points * Sunprincess * (3/22/2014 8:55:00 PM)

    ............beautifully written with lots of loves.. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,426 Points Ken E Hall (10/23/2012 4:26:00 AM)

    A perfect way to end in a sea of love transported in a blue balloon fairy tale ending for true love...regards (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 4 Points Nader Baheri (10/22/2012 10:45:00 AM)

    so romantically piece of written.
    tnx for sharing (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Eindaray Kyaw (10/19/2012 4:22:00 AM)

    Yes..I do agree with Ellias..the balloon in your poem is so amazing! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 264 Points Ellias Anderson Jr. (10/17/2012 8:41:00 AM)

    This balloon must be a perfect experiment. and it shows that how kind and sweet you are to your wife
    well done dear (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,830 Points S.zaynub Kamoonpuri (10/17/2012 7:12:00 AM)

    Wow super cool poem with love burstin balloon! Enjoyd soo much. I hope u read my other cments. Thanx 4 yors. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 122 Points Yash Shinde (10/16/2012 9:23:00 AM)

    so beautiful sir loved your style short and sweet........so good............it is simply elegant in its simplicity (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 18,294 Points Ramesh Rai (10/16/2012 8:50:00 AM)

    I agree with you sea of love has no end that you have been able to pick up. master write. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 30,534 Points Valsa George (10/14/2012 11:30:00 PM)

    I visualize the balloon bursting with a prick, letting out a sea of love for the whole world to bathe in! ! Wonderful imagination! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 414 Points Joseph Anderson (10/14/2012 3:42:00 PM)

    A great metaphor for love-simplisticly beautiful and I love your brevity in creating this-
    Wow! would not any wife appreciate this (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,149 Points Elena Sandu (10/14/2012 8:24:00 AM)

    I love this poem, it's more than a ten! Sweet and very relaxing, soothing! Swimming into a blue sea of love, now, thank you! (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,395 Points Smoky Hoss (10/11/2012 1:06:00 PM)

    Such sweet poetic words, wonderful! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,999 Points Neela Nath Das (10/9/2012 7:14:00 AM)

    So nice! A beautiful poem on love.Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,458 Points Unwritten Soul (10/8/2012 2:43:00 PM)

    Inside the ballon
    the crimson feelings swirl
    the love filled inside it,
    let it goes high will never fall
    never less than sky tall
    climb the air toward the end
    and the sea of love will reach it
    but if it explode one day
    we all will never dry again
    showered by the love eternally
    By our red balloon as a serene moon
    ...continuity inspired by Hans_Soul (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,860 Points Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi (10/7/2012 9:51:00 PM)

    thislu poem is slightly different from your usual write. the blue balloon, the blue sky, the blue oceans and the Hearts pumping fast! Nice poem! (Report) Reply










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