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Aufie Zophy

Freshman - 1,551 Points (18 October 1964)

Y..... The Balloon


I went to the sea of love, this noon
I took it and put it in a blue balloon

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A small poem dedicated to my lovely wife

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  • Freshman - 1,280 Points Ken E Hall (10/23/2012 4:26:00 AM)

    A perfect way to end in a sea of love transported in a blue balloon fairy tale ending for true love...regards (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 155 Points Ellias Aghili (10/17/2012 8:41:00 AM)

    This balloon must be a perfect experiment. and it shows that how kind and sweet you are to your wife
    well done dear (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 75 Points Yash Shinde (10/16/2012 9:23:00 AM)

    so beautiful sir loved your style short and sweet........so good............it is simply elegant in its simplicity (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,564 Points Ramesh Rai (10/16/2012 8:50:00 AM)

    I agree with you sea of love has no end that you have been able to pick up. master write. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 12,580 Points Valsa George (10/14/2012 11:30:00 PM)

    I visualize the balloon bursting with a prick, letting out a sea of love for the whole world to bathe in! ! Wonderful imagination! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 140 Points Joseph Anderson (10/14/2012 3:42:00 PM)

    A great metaphor for love-simplisticly beautiful and I love your brevity in creating this-
    Wow! would not any wife appreciate this (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,053 Points Elena Sandu (10/14/2012 8:24:00 AM)

    I love this poem, it's more than a ten! Sweet and very relaxing, soothing! Swimming into a blue sea of love, now, thank you! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 840 Points Unwritten Soul (10/8/2012 2:43:00 PM)

    Inside the ballon
    the crimson feelings swirl
    the love filled inside it,
    let it goes high will never fall
    never less than sky tall
    climb the air toward the end
    and the sea of love will reach it
    but if it explode one day
    we all will never dry again
    showered by the love eternally
    By our red balloon as a serene moon
    ...continuity inspired by Hans_Soul (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 2,974 Points Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi (10/7/2012 9:51:00 PM)

    thislu poem is slightly different from your usual write. the blue balloon, the blue sky, the blue oceans and the Hearts pumping fast! Nice poem! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 138 Points Spiritual Seeker (10/7/2012 10:35:00 AM)

    let's bathe in its content
    a sea of love, to never end....yes, true love is deeper than the sea....without end. V nice, a big 10. (Report) Reply

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