Aufie Zophy

Bronze Star - 2,822 Points (18 October 1964)

Y..... The Balloon - Poem by Aufie Zophy

I went to the sea of love, this noon
I took it and put it in a blue balloon

........................
........................
read full text »


Poet's Notes about The Poem

A small poem dedicated to my lovely wife

Comments about Y..... The Balloon by Aufie Zophy

  • Rookie - 197 Points Spiritual Seeker (10/7/2012 10:35:00 AM)

    let's bathe in its content
    a sea of love, to never end....yes, true love is deeper than the sea....without end. V nice, a big 10. (Report) Reply

    1 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • Rookie - 24 Points Yoonoos Peerbocus (10/7/2012 7:58:00 AM)

    the end rhyme/in heroic couplet befits the theme/easy to follow (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,711 Points Valerie Dohren (10/7/2012 7:57:00 AM)

    Very sweet Aufie - great imagination. (Report) Reply










[Hata Bildir]