Aufie Zophy

Gold Star - 8,689 Points (18 October 1964)

Y..... The Balloon - Poem by Aufie Zophy

I went to the sea of love, this noon
I took it and put it in a blue balloon

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Poet's Notes about The Poem

A small poem dedicated to my lovely wife

Comments about Y..... The Balloon by Aufie Zophy

  • Unwritten Soul Unwritten Soul (10/8/2012 2:43:00 PM)

    Inside the ballon
    the crimson feelings swirl
    the love filled inside it,
    let it goes high will never fall
    never less than sky tall
    climb the air toward the end
    and the sea of love will reach it
    but if it explode one day
    we all will never dry again
    showered by the love eternally
    By our red balloon as a serene moon
    ...continuity inspired by Hans_Soul (Report) Reply

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  • V S (10/7/2012 9:51:00 PM)

    thislu poem is slightly different from your usual write. the blue balloon, the blue sky, the blue oceans and the Hearts pumping fast! Nice poem! (Report) Reply

  • Spiritual Seeker (10/7/2012 10:35:00 AM)

    let's bathe in its content
    a sea of love, to never end....yes, true love is deeper than the sea....without end. V nice, a big 10. (Report) Reply

  • Yoonoos Peerbocus (10/7/2012 7:58:00 AM)

    the end rhyme/in heroic couplet befits the theme/easy to follow (Report) Reply

  • Valerie Dohren Valerie Dohren (10/7/2012 7:57:00 AM)

    Very sweet Aufie - great imagination. (Report) Reply

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