Aufie Zophy

Gold Star - 12,504 Points (18 October 1964)

Y..... The Balloon - Poem by Aufie Zophy

I went to the sea of love, this noon
I took it and put it in a blue balloon

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Poet's Notes about The Poem

A small poem dedicated to my lovely wife

Comments about Y..... The Balloon by Aufie Zophy

  • (10/7/2012 9:51:00 PM)


    thislu poem is slightly different from your usual write. the blue balloon, the blue sky, the blue oceans and the Hearts pumping fast! Nice poem! (Report) Reply

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  • (10/7/2012 10:35:00 AM)


    let's bathe in its content
    a sea of love, to never end....yes, true love is deeper than the sea....without end. V nice, a big 10.
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  • (10/7/2012 7:58:00 AM)


    the end rhyme/in heroic couplet befits the theme/easy to follow (Report) Reply

  • Valerie Dohren (10/7/2012 7:57:00 AM)


    Very sweet Aufie - great imagination. (Report) Reply










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