Y/.. Thirst Poem by Aufie Zophy

Y/.. Thirst

Rating: 3.5


The dry soil
The brown grass
The thirsty tree
a thunderstorm

Thursday, August 21, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: nature
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Spiritual Seeker 06 October 2014

The blessing that comes from above... that gives life to the dead. A touching observation in a few words

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Amitava Sur 10 September 2014

I liked the tricky writing, inspires me to write next few lines as....... Welcomes The rain To shower upon.........

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Walterrean Salley 10 September 2014

All favorable conditions for a great down pouring. A clever write, finely formatted.

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Mohammad Skati 03 September 2014

A lovely poem with a great message. Thanks.

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