Y// Written In The Sand Poem by Aufie Zophy

Y// Written In The Sand

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It is written in the sand
The purpose of our life
Millions of grains of sand

If the sea‘d have erased it from the shore
The grains will have whispered it to the drops
And waves, the braking waves will sing
The purpose of our life

If the heat of day erased it from the surf
Evaporating mist ‘ll carry it to the clouds
Where they will paint it in amazing skies
The purpose of our life

The clouds will rain and
And diamond beads will ornament the rose
The rose's scent will tell it
The purpose of our life

But if we fail to find it
In the sand or song of waves
In the clouds or scent of roses
The purpose of our life

We may have to make it quiet
And look deep within our heart
Where it will be dancing all around
The purpose of our life.

If we do not find it in our hearts,
We may have to return to sand
It is written in the sand.

Friday, December 25, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: heart,purpose
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bharati Nayak 30 December 2015

This is really wonderful write.The purpose of our life written on grains of sands, on the wves of seas, painted in the skies, fall as rain as diamond beads on petals of rose, carried in the scent of roses or can be found deep within written in our heart- - - - - - - - Oh love every bit of this poem.Thank you so much for sharing this marvelous write.

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Unwritten Soul 26 December 2015

I love many parts of your poem but this one just bind to my mind The clouds will rain and And diamond beads will ornament the rose The rose's scent will tell it The purpose of our life Cheers :)

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Unwritten Soul 26 December 2015

Very nice and it made from beautiful thought definately...As we will read what was written in the sand someday, let you read my comment written in your mind first, and my comment is..very well done Hans :)

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Valsa George 25 December 2015

Very philosophic.... the purpose of life may be sometimes written in the sand. But if we are not quick to discern it, it may get swept away by the waves! We can also read the purpose of our life through many other sources. If everything fails, look into one's heart and there in all probability, we will find it! Lovely write!

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Hans Vr 26 December 2015

So true, Valsa, It is in our heart. Spending some time in nature may facilitate the process but if we do not find it, we have to keep searching. :)

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Edward Kofi Louis 25 December 2015

The sand of the land with the muse of love and joy! Nice work.

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