Ye Dard Poem by abhishek sharma

Ye Dard

Rating: 5.0


kaise mai kahun
is dard ke baare mai
jo pal raha hai mere dil mai
ye kaisi kahani hai
jisko sunau mai kaise
dard bhi ek ehsaas hai
jo mujh ko mehsoos hota hai
dil mai mere
ek khwab saa palta hai
kabhi kabhi tutta hai
dil mera
aur mujhe dard kaa utna hi ehsaas
hota hai
ye kaisa dard hai
jahan mera dil baar baar tut taa hai..

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aftab Alam Khursheed 21 November 2013

Nice but problem lies there //dard bhi ek ehsaas hai jo mujh ko mehsoos hota hai/ /kabhi kabhi tutta hai dil mera aur mujhe dard kaa utna hi ehsaas hota hai(dard ye kaisa ehsaas hai, mujhe jo mehsoos hota hai) done misre ek hi hain jara soncho mai ne likha hai try rightly going abhi samay hai insaan sikhta hai janam se maran tak koi umar nahi hoti siikhne sikhaane ki

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Abii Sharma 20 November 2013

thank youu sirrr for this compliment..

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Ramesh Rai 20 November 2013

Bahut hi achhi nazm hai. likhte rahiye.

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