Susy Evelyne

Rookie - 68 Points (Bristol)

Yellow Archangels - Poem by Susy Evelyne

After the rain
The air hangs
Fresh and cool,
As by a stream.
While on the pale
Crumbling wall
Ivy gleams
With a strangely
Captivating light.

And yet it is only
Half as bright
As new-leaved limes
In this urban glade,
Where wrens trill
And yellow archangels
Flower in the shade.



Copyright Susy Evelyne 2006


Comments about Yellow Archangels by Susy Evelyne

  • Gold Star - 8,366 Points Khairul Ahsan (12/7/2013 7:12:00 AM)

    This is a beautiful poem.
    'In this urban glade,
    Where wrens trill
    And yellow archangels
    Flower in the shade.'
    Heart touching imagery, liked these lines very much! (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 90 Points John Brown (10/23/2013 10:19:00 AM)

    I like your style Susy, well written. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, October 7, 2013

Poem Edited: Tuesday, October 8, 2013


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