Yellow Desire Poem by Ashraful Musaddeq

Yellow Desire



Too close— but billion distance
Two high rises side by side
— Non-reachable

On the valley of your noose
A noon was bent differently
Yellow desire oozed on brows
Purple wind darker than grief

If midnight moon comes close
I’ll be a wild flower on hill foot

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
premji premji 27 June 2009

true poet....... mad at heart.................................

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Ejaz Khan 27 June 2009

A blazing sun is on horizon, keep shining! Stunning imageries.

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beautiful images in this poem

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Tsira Goge 27 June 2009

Beautiful there are at you desires, dear Ashraful. The midnight moon perfectly operated on you / with a smile / 10... Thank you...... Tsira

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Indira Renganathan 27 June 2009

A treasury of imagery you are in....marvellous

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Vote Box not found? Why? Still Ten by all heart dr.sakti

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'On the valley of your noose A noon was bent differently...' Excellent imagery! Wow! ! Carried forward. Ten++ But how to communicate? No message allowed. Regards dr sakti

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Sarwar Chowdhury 01 July 2009

astonishing pictograph painted! 10++++

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Brishti Mazumdar 30 June 2009

if midnight moon comes close I’ll be a wild flower on hill foot Wonderful....you are capable of telling so many things in so small a space.... 10++++++++++++

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Glorious imagery Ashraful and the wild flower did it for me. 10 Karin Anderson

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Ashraful Musaddeq

Ashraful Musaddeq

Bangladesh
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