~yellow Rose~ 2 Versions Poem by Sinnaminsun Sinnaminsun

~yellow Rose~ 2 Versions



While rolling, circle wheat abounds
in valleys far and wide surround,
Where under skies stretched powder-blue
there lies a rose blushed red by you.

As tempered breaths hush whispered winds
blows passion's mists on morning's shin,
Escaped desire arose the sun
shone yellow blooms upon...among.

This spearing tone shines deeper still
as evening dark around now spills,
And with this night shades yellow, red
a love once grew and now is dead.

6-24-07

second version below:

Where rolling circle wheat abounds
in valleys green and wide surround,
Far under skies stretched kelly-blue
there lies a rose blushed red by you.

As tempered breaths hush whispered winds
blows passion's mist on morning shins,
Escapes desire, arise the sun
shines yellow hues upon...among.

This evening's tone sears deeper still
as darkness black around will spill,
Within the night grows one rose red
where love once grew but now lies dead.

sinnaminsun 2009

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