Ali Sabry

Gold Star - 7,205 Points (11/08/1988 / Iraq - Baghdad)

Yesterday I Was Walking Alone On The Road - Poem by Ali Sabry

Yesterday I was walking alone on the road
I was listening to the car noise
& between the car lights I was seeing your face
Your picture it's shadow in the dark
Your shadow don't need lights to be visible
Cause all of you is lights
You are my light of my way
By your eyes I can see
Without you I'm blind
Why you didn't call me whole these long months
Where are you now
Please let me hear your pure voice for once
I know that the fate is to stay far away from each other
What can we do this is it we must accept it
I'm alone
The walls of my room cried for my situation
The empty pillow beside me in my bed asking about you


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Yesterday I Was Walking Alone On The Road

Comments about Yesterday I Was Walking Alone On The Road by Ali Sabry

  • Pawan Meena Pawan Meena (8/25/2016 10:12:00 AM)

    U really love your beloved so much (Report) Reply

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  • Ajay Kumar Adarsh Ajay Kumar Adarsh (8/8/2016 10:53:00 AM)

    very nice poem
    I like these LINE

    You are my light of my way
    By your eyes I can see
    Without you I'm blind (Report) Reply

  • David Bisacca (8/1/2016 10:16:00 AM)

    Vey Nice..! ..hits my heart in in many ways... (Report) Reply

  • Amri Ramsey Amri Ramsey (7/31/2016 2:05:00 AM)

    Beautifully written. Great job (Report) Reply

  • Ashish Chand Ashish Chand (7/31/2016 1:25:00 AM)

    you should go a long way..
    do not leave your track...
    growing is maturing.... but it is also narrowing of your vision.... try to avoid...
    ..
    write continuously.... (Report) Reply

  • Harshit Sheth Harshit Sheth (7/22/2016 12:27:00 PM)

    YOu gave an integrity with you words! #respectToYoudWork! ! (Report) Reply

  • Jonaid Ahmed Jonaid Ahmed (7/5/2016 10:07:00 AM)

    Good Writing.Hope for further success... (Report) Reply

  • Istabraq Al Ahmadi Istabraq Al Ahmadi (6/24/2016 3:55:00 AM)

    With some reservations, this poem is intensely romantic and powerfully expressive. You need to rewrite certain expressions to give powerful impact. Also, you need to pay attention to punctuation and grammar mistakes. I advise you to read English poetry as much as you can because this will yield great benefits to you as a poet with romantic and honest touches. Thanks a lot for inviting me to read your poems. It was an honor for me. Wish you best of luck. (Report) Reply

  • Bharati Diggikar (6/12/2016 8:21:00 AM)

    The play of light and shadow is whole life.. and love is the soul of life. Well written, dear Poet. (Report) Reply

  • Piumi Wijenayake Piumi Wijenayake (5/8/2016 9:25:00 PM)

    Good choice in words it has such beautiful flow it says about a man violently in love (Report) Reply

  • Unnikrishnan E S (5/2/2016 10:02:00 AM)

    I find the poet pouring his heart into words. Yeah, separation is so painful. Very emotional poem. Nice choice of words. Good Poetry. Ali, congrats; pl keep writing. And thank you for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Roxanne Dubarry (4/26/2016 4:47:00 PM)

    Separation from your loved one is hard. Especially when she does decide to leave you! I will pray to God he will heal your pain! (Report) Reply

  • Gauri Vyas Gauri Vyas (4/24/2016 1:04:00 PM)

    Very very well expressed...intensifying lines. LOVED IT! !
    though, it was very difficult to choose my favorite line but still..

    Your picture it's shadow in the dark
    Your shadow don't need lights to be visible
    Cause all of you is lights... (Report) Reply

  • Vaidyanathan Ram Iyer (4/18/2016 1:14:00 PM)

    The expression was Nice, thank you (Report) Reply

  • Rose Sadler Rose Sadler (4/7/2016 3:09:00 PM)

    i love the poem it is beautiful and is expressed perfectly i love it 10 out of 10 (Report) Reply

  • Jez Brul Jez Brul (3/30/2016 8:49:00 AM)

    A poem written by a man so inlove with her woman...Lovely poem! ! (Report) Reply

  • Menato San Menato San (3/25/2016 2:34:00 AM)

    Nice piece.I really like it (Report) Reply

  • Stephen Nephetson Stephen Nephetson (3/22/2016 8:28:00 AM)

    Eloquent indeed. Perhaps beautiful. (Report) Reply

  • Tapan M. Saren Tapan M. Saren (3/20/2016 4:04:00 AM)

    Nice one.. Touching words.. (Report) Reply

  • Mwenyeji Spikes Mwenyeji Spikes (3/15/2016 1:47:00 AM)

    This is a great poem with amazing use of words to create the vivid pictures (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, October 4, 2012

Poem Edited: Monday, October 29, 2012


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