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yet still the sun will rise

yet still the sun will rise

i can love,
i can hate,
i can believe all your lies,
yet still the sun will rise.

we can yell,
we can scream,
we can break all ties,
yet still the sun will rise.

you can pretend,
you can ignore,
forget the mournful cries,
yet still the sun will rise.

but one thing remains true,
some day i'll love again.
the truth showing in my eyes
yet still, the sun will rise

~please comment and let me know what you think ^^

Submitted: Wednesday, October 07, 2009
Edited: Wednesday, October 07, 2009


Comments about this poem (yet still the sun will rise by mallory burr )

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  • masked lady (12/14/2009 11:00:00 PM)

    10 VOTES!

    Very nice! so simple yet so meaningful!

    Yes, the sun will surely shine no matter what. After the night, after the rain, after a storm, the sun will shine. At times the sun may not be glaringly hot but it surely shines.

    Keep on writing, you write very well.

    GOD BLESS!

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  • M M (10/7/2009 6:57:00 PM)

    Again, your still an amazin poet keep it up. Your gunna go far kid.=D

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