You Poem by Asif Baloch
You
Misery is You
Agony is You
What should I say
What else are You
You never found
Anyone in this life
You’ll stay alone it’s
The God gift to You
God gives one chance
It’s said!
But he forgot to give
That chance to You
Pain runs in your vein
Like a bad black blood
You’ll never be cured
It’s written by the fate
On the book of You
One day you’ll wake up
From this horrible dream
Then there no one else
Will be around
Just You and You
A thoughtful piece, and obviously addressed to self which is a novel idea.A Ten
This is an amazing and innovative poem. There is an influence of classical urdu poetry, i think, though i might be wrong. But a wonderful way of expressing oneself. thanks.
'One day you’ll wake up From this horrible dream Then there no one else Will be around Just You and You ' Such intense poetery i loved it +++++++++10 anju
'One day you’ll wake up From this horrible dream Then there no one else Will be around Just You and You' Wonderful poem. 10+
interesting... i like the fact that when you mentioned the preson you said 'You' and not 'you'. puts a whole different perspictive on it. it's great thanks
Another touching poem...so revealing life's arcane secrets....very well written congrats. Bhayya....10
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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A nice piece with you with a nice ending. Imagery is beautiful,10 for this.