You Poem by hafsa ali

You



i find you once again
your like the star toi my life
the wind
the breeze
the one who i wait for to say goodnight to
and the first to say good moring to
the only one for me forever would i love you
only you
but why do you bring back the bad memorise
the one you know is going to upset me and you
don't let it come between us.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Marieta Maglas 10 May 2010

excellent poem, deep ideas well embedded, thank you for sharing

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Nice poem. I like the comparrisons. Keep up the good work. *~Layla Stone~*

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