(September 3,1992)

What do you think this poem is about?

You

Deep beneath the thickest wall,
Inside, inside there is a chest.
Chest full of happy dreams,
A chest full of colors and joy
They have a name,
They have a shape.

You.

To begin the life with,
For the little sweet sacrifices,
That love shared in a tight hug,
Bond strengthened with untainted trust,
Care and craziness go hand in hand,
And all I want is,

You.


In each corners of life,
For being alive and feeling adrift,
To share that one breath,
To unite the soul.
in my eyes, all I see is,

You.

I've bitten by this mad cupid,
But I'm not blinded,
My heart beats in rhythm,
Restless to reach the shore,

I realise,
I never lost my love
I'm just lost in love,
Would want to remain like that,
To fall deep and to rise again
And thats my heaven, thats my hell.
The world is,

You,

My world is and ever will be,

You.

Submitted: Friday, May 03, 2013
Edited: Saturday, May 04, 2013

Poet's Notes about The Poem

Its always been You, and always will be.

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  • Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi (5/19/2013 7:13:00 AM)

    the nature is nature, none can change that, particularly when one is in love. Even our sage Vishwamitra had started to flirt when his heart's rhythm ticked quickly. any way nice to read with lots of doubt in the rational mind..

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  • Hari Smith Holms (5/16/2013 7:24:00 AM)

    Obsessed with the mood and diction of this write. Beautiful.

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  • Payal Parande (5/13/2013 5:05:00 AM)

    oh how romantic...You've gotta dance like there's nobody watching,
    Love like you'll never be hurt,
    Sing like there's nobody listening,
    And live like it's heaven on earth

    beautiful write sir job well done

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  • David Wood (5/8/2013 11:15:00 AM)

    Lost in love, cupid strikes again. A lovely love poem

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  • Valsa George (5/7/2013 10:45:00 PM)

    I am bitten by this mad Cupid/ But I am not blinded, Yes, that has to be the right attitude. Never let us be blinded by anything! A wonderful write Aswath, in poetic beauty and the sweep of romantic fancy!

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  • Valerie Dohren (5/5/2013 9:28:00 AM)

    Lovely and romantic poem, a delight to read.

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  • Chandra Thiagarajan (5/3/2013 9:31:00 PM)

    Lovely Aswath! Let the love be always with you!

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