You Poem by Heather Burns

You

Rating: 5.0


The
mysteries
of you
entice me

to
search
deeper
into your
existence.

You haunt
my
daydreams
with your
unknown.

I phantom
you
into
reality.

Friday, September 5, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: dreams
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aftab Alam Khursheed 20 September 2014

Here the poem is deep rooted yesterday , Keats poem Psyche I'll make a fane into untrodden rigion of my mind I 'll worship thee here you did I phantom you into reality. I am making my imagination real superb touching deep Thank you Heather

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Lyn Paul 12 September 2014

So much to pen. It is such an amazing release too. A great write

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Roseann Shawiak 10 September 2014

Mysteries continually entice poets, they search for meaning and answers within themselves, as you say, haunting daydreams with the unknown. We poets do bring them into reality with every poem we write. A never-ending proposition in our lives. An excellent poem Heather with hidden meanings of curiosity. Thank you, RoseAnn

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Amitava Sur 10 September 2014

A wonderful expression of the quest for the Absolute.... very nice.

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