You All Get Lost Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

You All Get Lost

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“You all get lost “I blasted the friends,
'You all have robbed me” in the ends,
'Why could I not smell your presence?
'Was that not the necessity or essence?

I was struck and dumb founded,
presence of greed, lust, hate so sounded,
that too in the form of friends rounded,
still firmly placed inside and grounded,

had I not heard your conversation?
I would have been the always in question,
was I guided by the force external?
Or was it the fight internal?

I lament and express my sorrow,
what would I leave for tomorrow?
was I here always to borrow?
Only to give love a room to grow,

'And you remained my closet mate'
you were the one who always hate,
Why didn’t I show you the gate?
Why I allowed you to shape my fate?

And you too dear o, greed,
always I fought for not so need,
created class, cast and more creed,
spread the poison like water with weed,

I may look unwise and foolish,
may leave the world without accomplish,
I will look so down with shame,
Not you all but I only to blame,

You all have done a tremendous loss,
I was master and always a boss,
I used to win without any toss,
Now I play all games but with loss,


O, dear Money you made big hole,
you were not prime but stood as pole,
why I not alarmed with lost game whole,
With all this signals I missed bug role,

Had It not been because of you all?
Would that not have been day of call/
Why should I try and prevent any fall,
Game I have lot even with new ball,

'You forgive us all for what we did?
Never we hide our presence candid,
you never got or thought in mind,
never you paid any attention of any kind,

had it been not we present in you?
You would have never remembered 'THOU'
Why then you downs us so lower,
Like you not many but find so fewer,

You are very pious and so religious,
but rest are many with greed and vicious,
It is not we who make you so down,
It is your fault by which you are drown,

We all just stayed and made you aware,
who was stopping you from taking care?
This is just alarm and ringing bell,
neither is the story nor simple tale

why did we chose not angles but man?
So rush he to God and apology can,
all money you made after great run,
all will be in vain and you not have fun

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chaul Vania 28 September 2009

'Why could I not smell your presence? 'Was that not the necessity or essence?

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Rupa Shah 28 September 2009

had I not heard your conversation? I would have been the always in question, was I guided by the force external?

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Suresh Vakil 28 September 2009

had I not heard your conversation? I would have been the always in question, was I guided by the force external?

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Pami Panchal 29 September 2009

'Why could I not smell your presence? 'Was that not the necessity or essence?

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Saroj Davde 29 September 2009

had I not heard your conversation? I would have been the always in question, was I guided by the force external?

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Twinkle Vohra 03 October 2009

lament and express my sorrow, what would I leave for tomorrow? was I here always to borrow?

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Sadia Hussain 03 October 2009

had I not heard your conversation? I would have been the always in question, was I guided by the force external? Or was it the fight internal?

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Ramdulari Sinha 03 October 2009

“You all get lost “I blasted the friends, 'You all have robbed me” in the ends, 'Why could I not smell your presence?

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Sita Kesri 02 October 2009

What words have to do? When lack commitment, What appearance has to do? When lack inner beauty?

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K.v. Subbarao 01 October 2009

You all get lost “I blasted the friends, 'You all have robbed me” in the ends, 'Why could I not smell your presence? 'Was that not the necessity or essence

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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