Marie Shine

Gold Star - 9,573 Points (April 27th,1950 / Listowel. Co. Kerry)

You Are... - Poem by Marie Shine

My cup of coffee
in the morning when I rise
Delicious, hot and steamy
I drink you with my eyes

You are...
The bottle I drink from
as I taste your heavenly wine
and as you fill me up, my love
I feel so divine

You are...
My can of Diet Coke
I drink to quench my thirst
Flowing deep inside me in rivers
through which my banks, it's burst

You are...
My delicious chocolate cake
and you taste oh, so yummy!
Filling me with sweet delight
as you caress my tummy

You are...
My candle glowing warm
Your love shines just for me
I am your candle glowing warm
My love shines just for thee.....

Comments about You Are... by Marie Shine

  • Gold Star - 15,195 Points Pamela Sinicrope (11/10/2015 1:57:00 PM)

    Yes, a great poem! Shall I compare there to my favorite chocolate cake? ;) . This is very sweet and romantic. I like how you colored your lover to your favorite things so beautifully and then brought the two of you together at the end. I enjoyed this. Great write! :) (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 54,928 Points Roseann Shawiak (9/17/2015 10:09:00 AM)

    Great poem even flow of rhythm and rhyme! I love your imagery, it's very picturesque and lovely! Enjoyed this poem very much, full of love and life! Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,065 Points Wahab Abdul (2/25/2014 10:29:00 AM)

    wow, very nice poem with a great it... (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, November 29, 2013

Poem Edited: Saturday, November 30, 2013

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