naida supnet (bayambang, pangasinan, philippines)

wow! ! ! its too good.............i loved reading this one..........
its so good that i wanted to read it again......... n i ended up reading it for more than 3 times....



You are in my silence as natural as I breathe
Like the stars in the sky and the letters in my sheets
You appear in my thoughts in every waking moment
I love thinking of you, always, I'll keep silent.


thises lines are simply amazing......

wow...you are in my silence...
what a wonderful concept, thoughts...
You made a magical painting of words...
Your piece itself signifies tranquility..
really a nice write...keep on writing, Naid

Silence is sometimes the best speech like yours here....very well painted reticence in love.....submerged and subconscious mind it speaks of...beautiful write

I like the idea of 'i'll keep silent' as refuge, in order to keep you there ' you are in my silence'. Nice words ' when you came all the closed garden gates/ are fulfilled with music the sadness melts'. beautiful..Cristina Teodor

'You are in my silence can't you listen
I don't want to think there are things I'm missing
It must be magic It might be love'


Steal Into Our Silences

true love is sweet heartfelt thoughts
for those who steal into our thoughts
for those who steal into our silences

especially in last moments before soft sleep
when we wonder how this love beauty creep
into our wondrous quiet moments of silences

into our lives with wondrous sudden surprise
into our hearts with wondrous sudden speed
quiet time soft fills with friendship love silences

Inspired by ‘You Are In My Silence’ By Naida Supnet.
Copyright © Terence George Craddock

silence is amazing because you can get your thoughts straight especailly about love! :)

This is an excellent writing, i like the prose you used, cold as death that's what silence mean'...to me silence is like been inside the inner you with no sound just silence, hearing only your thoughts in a far away state of mind...I like it very good writing..

I have a poem that is one of my very inspire poem, 'My companion' you can you it up in my list, i think i have it there, because i don't have all my work here, but you can see f is there..

Thank you new friend

Lovely....nicely written.................Keep up...............10

Very nicely written you words flow and I love the way you emotions run throughtout this poem. Really beautifully written.

[it might be magic/it might be love]- much emotion aroused