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naida supnet

Rookie - 193 Points (bayambang, pangasinan, philippines)

You Are In My Silence


Cold as death that's what silence means
Numb and dark always sad scenes
But when you came all the closed garden gates
Are filled with music the sadness melts.

Now I find refuge and that is silence
I find a friend I guess in calmness
You house my thoughts if I don't talk
I paint a smile even as I walk.

My silence means only one reason
Busying myself with only one person
Thinking in the morning or in the afternoon
I even feel like a weightless balloon.

You are in my silence can't you listen
I don't want to think there are things I'm missing
It must be magic It might be love
Thinking 'bout it makes a quick throb.

You are in my silence as natural as I breathe
Like the stars in the sky and the letters in my sheets
You appear in my thoughts in every waking moment
I love thinking of you, always, I'll keep silent.

Submitted: Wednesday, January 20, 2010
Edited: Saturday, May 07, 2011

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  • Veteran Poet - 3,909 Points Khairul Ahsan (12/4/2013 10:54:00 PM)

    This was your first poem posted here, and this could be the best as well.
    You start the poem with a deadly sentence straightaway-'Cold as death that's what silence means' and then your natural flow begins. It's amazingly eloquent.
    'You house my thoughts if I don't talk
    I paint a smile even as I walk.'
    Beautiful thoughts! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Arfa Iris (10/17/2011 1:14:00 AM)

    wow! ! ! its too good.............i loved reading this one..........
    its so good that i wanted to read it again......... n i ended up reading it for more than 3 times....



    You are in my silence as natural as I breathe
    Like the stars in the sky and the letters in my sheets
    You appear in my thoughts in every waking moment
    I love thinking of you, always, I'll keep silent.


    thises lines are simply amazing...... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 26 Points Maia Padua (10/12/2011 9:32:00 AM)

    wow...you are in my silence...
    what a wonderful concept, thoughts...
    You made a magical painting of words...
    Your piece itself signifies tranquility..
    really a nice write...keep on writing, Naid (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 127 Points Allemagne Roßmann (8/30/2011 5:49:00 PM)

    Silence is sometimes the best speech like yours here....very well painted reticence in love.....submerged and subconscious mind it speaks of...beautiful write (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Cristina Teodor (5/14/2011 8:56:00 AM)

    I like the idea of 'i'll keep silent' as refuge, in order to keep you there ' you are in my silence'. Nice words ' when you came all the closed garden gates/ are fulfilled with music the sadness melts'. beautiful..Cristina Teodor (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Terence George Craddock (2/18/2011 2:36:00 AM)

    'You are in my silence can't you listen
    I don't want to think there are things I'm missing
    It must be magic It might be love'


    Steal Into Our Silences

    true love is sweet heartfelt thoughts
    for those who steal into our thoughts
    for those who steal into our silences

    especially in last moments before soft sleep
    when we wonder how this love beauty creep
    into our wondrous quiet moments of silences

    into our lives with wondrous sudden surprise
    into our hearts with wondrous sudden speed
    quiet time soft fills with friendship love silences

    Inspired by ‘You Are In My Silence’ By Naida Supnet.
    Copyright © Terence George Craddock (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Elena Toledo (2/4/2011 9:35:00 AM)

    This is an excellent writing, i like the prose you used, cold as death that's what silence mean'...to me silence is like been inside the inner you with no sound just silence, hearing only your thoughts in a far away state of mind...I like it very good writing..

    I have a poem that is one of my very inspire poem, 'My companion' you can you it up in my list, i think i have it there, because i don't have all my work here, but you can see f is there..

    Thank you new friend (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Kevin Carney (1/5/2011 12:54:00 AM)

    Very nicely written you words flow and I love the way you emotions run throughtout this poem. Really beautifully written. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 2 Points Louis Cecile (11/13/2010 5:12:00 AM)

    Nice concept and use of language. It has a good flow - though personally the 4th verse use of the word throb did not sit well for me. Overall a good poem. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 812 Points Unwritten Soul (11/13/2010 3:26:00 AM)

    Naida! Love the way u express all out...it was cool writing that burn all inner feelings with smokeless trace...i like the stars in sky and words in letter. Thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

  • Rookie John Oconnell (11/10/2010 7:57:00 PM)

    we could be talking about walking forever in the company of Jeus!
    thanks for your warm comment on 2 girls. kind regards, john (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Megan Dickson (11/4/2010 4:59:00 AM)

    i absolutely love this, especially these last 2 lines'You appear in my thoughts in every waking moment
    I love thinking of you, always, I'll keep silent.''
    as they echo my thoughts about that special somebody.good job! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Bert Bell (11/4/2010 1:20:00 AM)

    This is a beautiful poem. You express such lovely thoughts, naida, in a very special way. Very nice indeed.10 (Report) Reply

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