You Are In My Silence Poem by Naida Nepascua Supnet

[it might be magic/it might be love]- much emotion aroused

Very nicely written you words flow and I love the way you emotions run throughtout this poem. Really beautifully written.

This is an excellent writing, i like the prose you used, cold as death that's what silence mean'...to me silence is like been inside the inner you with no sound just silence, hearing only your thoughts in a far away state of mind...I like it very good writing.. I have a poem that is one of my very inspire poem, 'My companion' you can you it up in my list, i think i have it there, because i don't have all my work here, but you can see f is there.. Thank you new friend

silence is amazing because you can get your thoughts straight especailly about love! :)

I like it. Interesting how you built it.....first all is cold and dead, then it is alive and finally because of the life, it is as dead, but the opposite of cold and so very much alive. And silence so perfectly expresses it.

This is very nice. I have read three of your other poems and this is the best one so far.

This was your first poem posted here, and this could be the best as well. You start the poem with a deadly sentence straightaway-'Cold as death that's what silence means' and then your natural flow begins. It's amazingly eloquent. 'You house my thoughts if I don't talk I paint a smile even as I walk.' Beautiful thoughts!

wow! ! ! its too good.............i loved reading this one.......... its so good that i wanted to read it again......... n i ended up reading it for more than 3 times.... You are in my silence as natural as I breathe Like the stars in the sky and the letters in my sheets You appear in my thoughts in every waking moment I love thinking of you, always, I'll keep silent. thises lines are simply amazing......

wow...you are in my silence... what a wonderful concept, thoughts... You made a magical painting of words... Your piece itself signifies tranquility.. really a nice write...keep on writing, Naid

Silence is sometimes the best speech like yours here....very well painted reticence in love.....submerged and subconscious mind it speaks of...beautiful write