Soumita Sarkar Ray

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You Are My Dream.... - Poem by Soumita Sarkar Ray

Till your heart my long search ends
You turn into a hope that remains
Shoots of my desires started to settle
To find a corner in you to huddle
Day begins only to feel you closer
Drink in you, eat you, smell you and smear
Still the eagerness to know you more
Gives a tug and leads me to a door
Door shall open the recess of your mind
Deep layers of your being thus I find
Each pulse and cell echoes in your name
Your hair, your sweat, touch and game
To narrate in you a life that is mine
I wish to be your part that is my twine
We shall built on earth a nest like heaven
With feathers of me and you twined and woven


Comments about You Are My Dream.... by Soumita Sarkar Ray

  • Kishore Kumar Das Kishore Kumar Das (5/9/2016 11:51:00 AM)

    the close bond cemented between you and your dream....owner's pride.......passionate love in abundance in your splendid verses.. (Report) Reply

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  • Souren Mondal Souren Mondal (11/18/2015 11:57:00 AM)

    [...]To find a corner in you to huddle
    Day begins only to feel you closer
    Drink in you, eat you, smell you and smear
    Still the eagerness to know you more
    Gives a tug and leads me to a door[...]

    Passionate? Yes.. Romantic? Only with the CAPITAL 'R'....

    There is obviously a 'desire' in the speaker to be 'united' in love with the 'object' of this desire.. But somehow, the verbs in use - 'wish', 'shall' etc. suggest a very different story perhaps..

    The poem, to me, can actually be read more like a 'dream' than 'reality'... We can perhaps never 'know' the one we 'love' - once we do, unfortunately, it doesn't last...

    Not sure whether to call this a poem of dreams coming true or dreams REMAINING dreams.. Either ways, it is a poem incredibly well crafted.. Thank you for sharing.. (Report) Reply

  • Ramesh T A Ramesh T A (11/6/2015 5:12:00 AM)

    Nice romantic poem to read and muse over such a situation! (Report) Reply

  • Dr.tony Brahmin Dr.tony Brahmin (9/12/2015 9:29:00 PM)

    We shall built on earth a nest like heaven
    With feathers of me and you twined and woven

    There are so many images and symbols of deep love.. to find a corner in you, drink in you, eat you, smell you and smear, recess of the mind, pulse and cell echoes... thank you. i am touched... (Report) Reply

  • Nyota Yasulwe Nyota Yasulwe (8/18/2015 5:20:00 AM)

    We shall built on earth a nest like heaven
    With feathers of me and you twined and woven.... This poem ends so well with a message of a great future together. (Report) Reply

  • Howard 'the motivational poet' Simon Howard 'the motivational poet' Simon (5/9/2015 1:09:00 PM)

    Burdting with a beauty that is refreshing! (Report) Reply

  • Uma Ram Uma Ram (4/29/2015 2:44:00 AM)

    Beautiful love described sweetly Sowmita dear...With of me and you twined and woven...cute. liked it dear...Thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

  • Asoke Kumar Mitra (1/27/2015 12:20:00 PM)

    excellent write.the imagery used here very nice.very heart wrenching write.............. (Report) Reply

  • Mohammed Al-balushi (11/9/2013 10:29:00 PM)

    very deep and lovely expression that touch the heart (Report) Reply

  • Heather Wilkins Heather Wilkins (10/16/2013 5:29:00 PM)

    lovely expression of your dream. very passionate (Report) Reply

  • Heather Wilkins Heather Wilkins (10/16/2013 5:05:00 PM)

    deep layers of your being thus I find. a beautiful passionate write. (Report) Reply

  • Aftab Alam Khursheed Aftab Alam Khursheed (9/29/2013 10:55:00 AM)

    Passionate like WW and Frah commented I am Agreed with her thank you (Report) Reply

  • Farah Ilyas Farah Ilyas (9/27/2013 1:49:00 PM)

    very energetic n passionate in nature.. (Report) Reply

  • Elena Sandu Elena Sandu (9/18/2013 8:11:00 PM)

    Door shall open the recess of your mind
    Deep layers of your being thus I find I loved those words here's my wonder: Are we meant to know and love them all? Deep layers of the mind with every thought and joke like sudden turns, each beat of heart, the restless body with calculated charm? Hm... Most of us get the gift of one or the other. If one will give them all would other one become a god or very scared will turn its back? (Report) Reply

  • Jesus James Llorico Jesus James Llorico (9/18/2013 7:40:00 PM)

    Lovely, a match from heaven, and probably a dream
    come true. the eloquence of a passionate poetess,
    expressed in words. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, September 17, 2013

Poem Edited: Wednesday, September 18, 2013


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