Marie Shine

Gold Star - 9,573 Points (April 27th,1950 / Listowel. Co. Kerry)

You Are My Fantasy - Poem by Marie Shine

as I sat in the sunshine
You opened the door of my mind
and walked into my heart
Together, we sat
basking in warm, liquid rays
Slowly sipping the 'Champagne of Love'
poured into the crystal glasses
of loving thoughts
which we most lovingly shared
with each other
Wrapped in your arms
we lay on our bed
scattered with red rose petals
drenched in the dews of our love
Sweet words whispered
Promises exchanged
Together forever
side by side
'The Road of Life and Love'

Comments about You Are My Fantasy by Marie Shine

  • Gold Star - 15,195 Points Pamela Sinicrope (10/23/2015 8:40:00 AM)

    That was such a beautiful poem. You capture the essence of love in all its forms so well... Wine, champagne, Heinekin... ;)

    No really, what a lovely romantic poem! I need to go to Macy's and find those crystal glasses of loving thoughts... We should ALL have those at the ready. Beautiful metaphors! (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 20,512 Points Daniel Brick (4/6/2014 9:30:00 PM)

    This is a lovely and loving poem. You write in a forthright manner that is totally candid and totally respectful. I like the accumulation of details about what you shared on this day because together they convinced me this is a poem of soulmates. That's what makes it so wonderful: it's not just the accumulated details of a fine afternoon, but proof that people can find this fulfillment. Of course, I don't know if the events are real or imagined, because the poem is TRUE in both cases - it's true as a celebration of love or it's true as a vision of love. And we need both celebrations and visions if we are going to pursue happiness like a shining light! I'm saving this poem. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,120 Points Heather Wilkins (1/1/2014 12:15:00 PM)

    a beautifully written poem on the fantasy of love Marie. I can smell the rose petals (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 45,404 Points Valsa George (12/15/2013 2:46:00 AM)

    A beautiful poem on love and sharing which has the fragrance of a rose and the loveliness of a sweet dream! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, November 29, 2013

Poem Edited: Saturday, November 30, 2013

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