You Are My Soul Mate Poem by Dawood Rizwan

You Are My Soul Mate

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In the eyes of fate.
There are twinkling stars of wishful thinkings.
Dreams of forgotten heaven.

Among teh crowds of laughters.
You and me,
On the oppisite pole of the earth.
Live with our own satly tears.

Who can tell us.
We were same breath of the God.
Which was blown,
Half in you,
And half in my.
Before the Adam and Eve.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Maryam Khan 21 December 2008

Great poem. Lovely composition and wonderful presentation. I think you could not describe the situation better than this. Keep writing such poems. I would be happy, if you could spare your time to stamp your views on my poems as well. regrds maryam

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 19 December 2008

Beautiful poem Dawood. Keep on writing!

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Lahore, Pakistan
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