You Are My Whole World Poem by sagar patil.

You Are My Whole World

Rating: 5.0


you are my whole world
you are like god to me
somewhere in the shelter of your hearts
i have found my self in your desires
the way incense burn ever moment
you have desiring me

you are my whole world
you are like god to me

my love for you knows no bounds
you are the peace of my hearts
i can see in every direction
your shadow is every lovable
when you laugh, the whole universe laughs
that which you have woven through your lips
is a chain of beautiful love! !
i have read with my eyes
what is written in your eyes

you are my whole world
you are like god to me

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Poetheart Morgan 29 August 2012

Speechless. Are you sure that you have only 22? ? ? I don't know! you bring to me remembers....Just a feeling! ! ! Beautiful! ! ! !

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Payal Parande 31 August 2012

a beautiful poem indeed...again a delightful write from a delightful person thanks for sharing, payal

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Unwritten Soul 30 August 2012

Such a pleasing poem in original touch, so nice and blooming heart... You are like god to me even though i feel this is a great poem, comparing to god make me feel not comfy when you laugh, the whole universe laughs wow look at this line please dont let the one you saying here laugh because if we got one laugh, the whole universe laugh at same time, it can shake the space with hahahahahaha and then we will trouble....the energy of hahaaha will shake the world, the universe quake .. :) Joking! _Unwritten Soul

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Lalit Kumar Deb 30 August 2012

Words have simply poured out from the heart.

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Alexandria Angel 30 August 2012

Awwww I love this poem! ! It made my top 5 poems.

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Neela Nath Das 30 August 2012

Very nicely you expressed the feelings of a lover for his ladylove!

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sagar patil.

sagar patil.

maharashtra, india
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