You Are Real Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

You Are Real

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“No, you can not do” I held his hand
Brother was forced not to view it by father
Some of the legal papers
Which were kept in locked drawer?

Father was old but used to get anger
He may shout more and more
Brother lost temper
And tried to be aggressive in unworthy manner

I held his hand firmly and pushed aside
He was rattled and attempted twice
I warned him to be calm and peaceful
Else some thing else shall be imposed forceful

He got the message loud and clear
Now he felt bad developed fear
He was acting under rage and insult
He felt about being not consulted

Such things happen in each family
Not of same nature but differently
Parents do clash with children
It sends wrong signal and mind is sickened

The incidence made me to think
How could brother stoop to such level and sink?
Was it insecurity in mind or just a jealousy?
I wished some good sense and prayed almighty

“You are real son” father came to me and patted
I saw tears in his eyes and sadly spotted
“I shall never forget this gesture” he was almost broken
I took his hand and pressed gently with token of acknowledgement

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 10 March 2014

“No, you can not do” I held his hand Brother was forced not to view it by father

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 10 March 2014

Like 5 minutes ago by ryan lawley | Reply

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Chuy Amante 10 March 2014

Very nice, the eternal family drama... it just IS namaste

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 11 March 2014

Love matters as bond in family; but money batters peace as and when we wear the garb of ABEL and CAIN of the Bible. P Nasarudheen, Kasargod..KeraLa Mar 11,2014

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 11 March 2014

In this fully materialistic world, even love is counted on money-basis. Relationships do not have much value. Your poem points out at the necessity of having a value oriented life UK Atiyodi, Kandangali, Payyanur, Kannur 670307 Mar 11,2014

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 11 March 2014

Great Jessica Sikora3 hours ago Nicely done

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 10 March 2014

nice Anna Laurencio17 minutes ago well written Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 10 March 2014

Good Aaron Avila19 minutes ago Emotional, but flow is a bit strained

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