Unwritten Soul


You Are Someone (We Love)


A drop of tears
Flood all over the world
And we cant run but drown
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Topic of this poem: love


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This poem called 'You are someone (Weloveyou) ' is a poem that plead
people to love themselves as they are, no matter how you looked, living poor-rich, educated, troublesome as past, or maybe not good as other i just hope we remember each of us is a Brand life, what we need is to make the Brand not overshadow by others by giving out the best as we can and there was a time, when i was too lil i always wish to be someone else just because i afraid of thing and others already passed it..so i wished to be them not self, but when it's my turn...i told myself no matter what i own this and i cant be others so just prove that we are also just like them...maybe if our past is not great it never mean our future is black, not everything is closed for us, there always opportunities in anything happened so we must good to take this advantages to manipulate situation, never let situation manipulate us to be something that never help us at all. We live as ourselves now just once so if we giving up, what left for us? ? I believe who ever you are, we are the new brand to compete in life market, be creative and let fight to sell our voices in a good way(~_') _Soul

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  • Rookie - 321 Points Captain Cur (5/1/2013 5:49:00 AM)

    Your poems and prose are both powerful and send a clear strong message.
    If we love ourselves as we are, it does not matter what others think of us,
    because our core value is intact and impenetrable. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 919 Points Gulsher John (4/11/2013 2:32:00 AM)

    hats off.... for notes, not for poem
    your prose is more powerfull than your verse....
    refine it.... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 781 Points Thomas A Robinson (4/5/2013 7:06:00 AM)

    Tis so much fun being the Joker, said the riddler to the clown!
    Which one are we today?
    I don't know yet, let's just say it's unwritten. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 4 Points Nader Baheri (4/4/2013 9:31:00 AM)

    great poem just like as ever dear soul.
    this poem is telling the right tacts but let me add sth to it.
    sure its not true to be some one else but we may desire to take some one's position or what he or she has gained through his/her life.even to be better than them.it doesnt mean desire to be someone else, does it?
    I raise a question here.
    If we dont push ourselves how would we improve?
    kudos(hahah yes it s a chocolate for me, i swallowed it) ~nb (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 1 Points Jinal Oswal (4/3/2013 8:26:00 AM)

    Hi Soul, hope you doing great. Reading the poem I think you are doing wonderful. A real great thought shared by you. Wonderfully conveyed. Your pen just strikes the right chords. Keep up the good work. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 12,690 Points Valsa George (4/2/2013 12:17:00 PM)

    Yes, we can be Captains to sail at will! Weare the navigators of our own life! We never grow by pining to be someone else. Great thoughts beautifully expressed! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 155 Points Ellias Aghili (4/2/2013 6:30:00 AM)

    its important for all of us to be ourselves and make our own futures. Make our way. Our ideas will be shown to the future. We have unique opinions and souls but sometimes there is no chance. Well done
    Nice one (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 155 Points Ellias Aghili (4/2/2013 6:29:00 AM)

    its important for all of us to be ourselves and make our own futures. Make our way. Our ideas will be shown to the future. We have unique opinions and souls but sometimes there is no chance. Well done
    Nice one (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,513 Points Anthony Di''anno (4/1/2013 3:08:00 AM)

    Wonderful Unwritten Soul. A very passionate and compassionate plea for humans to forgive and to love themselves. I would love to know your thoughts on my poem 'Calling All Christians and Other Interested Beings.'
    Thank you for your beauty. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,966 Points Valerie Dohren (3/31/2013 1:43:00 PM)

    As Shakespeare said To thine own self be true - great philosophy Soul, and beautifully expressed in your poem. (Report) Reply

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