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Tabitha Lane

(11/24/90 / Georgia)

You Betrayed Me


You pick me up after class,
You give me a kiss

You say we are seeing your family,
Turns out we are at you place

Wondering why we came here,
You lead me to your room

You say it’s ok,
I’m confused

You give me a soda,
Tastes kinda weird

The doorbell rings,
Two other guys walk in the room

You assure me it’s going to be ok,
They are your friends so I guess its ok

You go to the restroom,
The door shuts behind you

One hands me a soda,
I drink four more

I start to feel light headed,
What’s taking him so long?

They both comes towards me,
Smiles on their faces

One rubs my leg,
The other unbuttons his pants

Submitted: Saturday, July 27, 2013
Edited: Monday, July 29, 2013
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