You Blame Us Poem by Akhtar Jawad

You Blame Us

Rating: 5.0


It was you!
Who broke him into two pieces!
And when he and she came into being,
your magic,
hidden in both the pieces,
you excited them to love,
and when they loved,
you enjoyed it with them,
you put all the blame on passion,
and the two passionate lovers,
and turned out the trio from your gardens,
let me know sweetheart,
why you had closed your eyes?
Leave it.
When your eyes are closed,
let me love once again,
again and again!
Three hundred sixty five into hundred,
Thirty six thousand five hundred times,
Or even more!

Monday, September 7, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: sin
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valsa George 17 September 2015

Yes, it was God who cut Adam into two. So it is natural for a man to seek his missing half and for a woman to look for her other half! They cannot but love and love all through!

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Bisma Mirza 08 September 2015

great one! ! ! ! ! ! .10 on 10..............

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Kumarmani Mahakul 08 September 2015

Love has excited loving nature that is wisely revealed here with wise motive. Amazing sharing...10

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Khalid Saifullah 07 September 2015

Akhtar jawad can imagine anything, liked this unique poem...........................10

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