You Bleed Red And I Bleed Black Poem by Christina Moore

You Bleed Red And I Bleed Black

Rating: 2.0


A smile on my face - Will never reach my eyes
You see laughs and jokes - they see all the lies
You bleed red and I bleed black
You're so great and I'm off track
You're the stick and I'm so not
You beat everything I've got
You have friends while I have none
When I'm sad you're having fun
You're so good and I'm so bad
That's the reason that I'm sad
Tommorow I'll be smiling - but my face is set in stone
The next I'll be gone - you'll be the one that's all alone

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gina Onyemaechi 22 January 2006

A strong finish. Who are you?

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***** ********* 22 January 2006

A very sad lament indeed. But well written and flowing beautifully, right to the end. Whoever you are,10 from me.

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Christina Moore

Christina Moore

Ottawa, Ont. CA
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