You'd Taken Control Poem by Mark Heathcote

You'd Taken Control



When I relinquished myself,
I gave up, all my own, soul.
I sank deeply, into yourself,
Ice-frozen, I couldn't escape.
How could I move on or cajole
Every part, you'd taken control.

When I relinquished myself,
There was a drum-beat loud,
It was my heart, losing itself.
Self-control, a bird, disavowed.
A wrecking-ball, fallen from a cloud
With all happiness disallowed.

Friday, October 3, 2014
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Valsa George 04 October 2014

A poem expressing a kind of mental subjugation one feels at being overpowered by another! A very strong exposition of emotions! Enjoyed! Thanks for visiting my page and your comments!

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 04 October 2014

A very passionate write indeed......Mark...... intensity of feelings and emotions very well expressed

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