You Don'T Deserve To Call You A Friend *** Poem by angelica ayman

You Don'T Deserve To Call You A Friend ***

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why everything is confused?
i care about you dear friend and give you a hope
and she think that this is the end
life is never going to stop
u don't have to give up
even if u lose someone u love, , , , , , , , , , , it's not a reason, , it's not enough!

i'm sure that you will never going to care
anyway there's no more things between us to share
everytime i beleive you i find that it's just a nightmare
anyway goodbye, , but you don't deserve that i cry

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Merna Ibrahim 15 September 2009

Actually, It's a bad, hard and sad thing to lose a friend...I disagree with you in that 2 verses 'u don't have to give up even if u lose someone u love, , , , , , , , , , , it's not a reason, , it's not enough! ' You are right that the person don't give up but...it's a painful and lethal thing to lose something you love forever...It's a reason and it's enough to make you collapse and lose your nerves although for a second! ! ...Anyway, Nice poem...Good work.

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