You Don'T Have To Think To Write A Nice Poem Poem by Antonio Liao

You Don'T Have To Think To Write A Nice Poem



why think? poetry does not demand
thinking

it demands feelings, your feelings,
and you have lots of them,
these feelings
of loss, of joy, of sorrow, of bliss,
of sadness, and happiness,

of longings, and regrets
of losing and gaining,

all these, do they require
so much thinking
and evaluating? no, they are there
with you, always waiting to be written
and sometimes
mind you, just put your hand
on the keys
and they start writing about
themselves
try the trance
lose yourself, be the breath
from your mouth
be the air from your nostrils
be the wind
be the spirit from your body
for once
let it fly away and take the
whole world
in the tips of your fingers
in the blink of your eye
in the slip of your tongue
in the wink
of your mind

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Miriam Maia Padua 25 May 2009

very wonderful words... written with all your feelings... thoughts are flowing smoothly... i love this... 10+++ _maia_

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Edna Javelosa 25 May 2009

beautifully penned..writing a poem needs feelings..sometimes words appear in your head even when you are near losing yourself to sleep..when you aren't even thinking at all..the only thing to do is capture them before they vanish in space like bubbles..and when you finally catch the words with your pen, the feelings go with it, capturing more of the essence from your heart..

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