You Don'T Live My Life Poem by poor lil copycat

You Don'T Live My Life



***This poem is the lyrics to a really terrible-sounding song I wrote, I thought the words were half-decent so I decided to publish it here on Poemhunter...***

Walkin' down the street, come to school today
All rain, no shine, all work, no play

Not a single sec to talk to friends
All work, no play until the end

I gotta find a way to get outta here
Too many deadlines looming near-

~Chorus~
I can't go on
The pain's too strong
I'm givin' up the fight

You wouldn't know
Too hard to show
Cuz you don't live my life
~
Oh, it's eating away at me inside
No place to run, no place to hide

Can't turn away, just can't strike out
Can't shield myself, can't give a shout

You wouldn't understand cuz you don't know
What it feels like to be laid low-

~Chorus~
I can't go on
The pain's too strong
I'm givin' up the fight

You wouldn't know
Too hard to show
Cuz you don't live my life...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Goth Fairy 28 February 2009

it's extremely good and has a great flow to it keep up the good work.

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