How could you do this to me?
How could you make me believe you ever cared?
Your living your life without any regrets.
And where am I?
Stuck in this hole and i cant get out.
Im living my life with so many mistakes,
starting with you.
We've been through this.
All you have to do is say 'I love you',
and im right where you want me-dead.
After a year of happiness, making memories, laughter, earth shaking, hand holding, mountains exploding, comets shooting, birds singing, and love, you still shattered my dreams.
After you ended our eternity, I realized,
you dont need a gun to kill someone.
you capture the reader from the start. top to bottom a great piece. nice work
that was phenomonal... i can dig it... a poem well writtin by a gr8 poet! ! keep it movin
you makes a dreamy world here After a year of happiness, making memories, laughter, earth shaking, hand holding, mountains exploding, comets shooting, birds singing, and love, you still shattered my dreams.
thats deep no doubt about it. so descriptive as well. i like it keep doin ya thang -mel
i love the way you put it. break ups are always bad. good write.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Wow, it actually does not get any deeper than that, the listing does a great job in strengthening your writing, great write...