You Dont Need A Gun... Poem by millie st.claire

You Dont Need A Gun...

Rating: 5.0


How could you do this to me?
How could you make me believe you ever cared?

Your living your life without any regrets.
And where am I?
Stuck in this hole and i cant get out.

Im living my life with so many mistakes,
starting with you.

We've been through this.
All you have to do is say 'I love you',
and im right where you want me-dead.

After a year of happiness, making memories, laughter, earth shaking, hand holding, mountains exploding, comets shooting, birds singing, and love, you still shattered my dreams.

After you ended our eternity, I realized,
you dont need a gun to kill someone.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Javier Falcon 06 July 2008

Wow, it actually does not get any deeper than that, the listing does a great job in strengthening your writing, great write...

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Aiden Florence 07 July 2008

Astonishing. Simply Beautiful.

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Bill Thomas 10 July 2008

Very deep - & tragic that the hurt goes deep too.

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Keith Hendrickson 07 July 2009

you capture the reader from the start. top to bottom a great piece. nice work

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Joey Habib 18 July 2008

that was phenomonal... i can dig it... a poem well writtin by a gr8 poet! ! keep it movin

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Kee Thampi 15 July 2008

you makes a dreamy world here After a year of happiness, making memories, laughter, earth shaking, hand holding, mountains exploding, comets shooting, birds singing, and love, you still shattered my dreams.

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Melinda Mackey 14 July 2008

thats deep no doubt about it. so descriptive as well. i like it keep doin ya thang -mel

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Kyle Shield Laster 12 July 2008

i love the way you put it. break ups are always bad. good write.

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