You Fake Poem by Pondering6649 Ponder

You Fake

Rating: 5.0


You let me see what you wanted me to see
Your hopes, your love, your life
When all along you hid your trueself
The anger, hurt and pride

I married you in good faith
And tried to make you happy
Nothing seemed to help
Not My love, our children nor the money

You were the love of my life
So special and adoring
But now I see you are so cruel
You are but my boring story

I thought you would change back
into my special guy
Instead your threw it all away
on women, smokes and others  

50 years have passed us by
Our children and grandchildren grown
But no matter what
You still remain as hard as a stone

We have but a few years left in us
Lets move on and make up
Be my loving lover
The one whom I still love

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Wahab Abdul 20 January 2012

this is a very special poem on a very important and universal topic'love' and family life.....though the story is very sad....but the poem ends in hope.....a very nice poem i like it..i enjoyed it thoroughly......keep it up ....and please read one of my poems

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Nicky Hill 04 January 2012

wow thats very well worderd, such ease with flow with your words yet so much passion

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