You Have Chosen Not To Come. Poem by udit kumar sahoo

You Have Chosen Not To Come.

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the throat chokes,
the mind unsteady,
the pen, fed to the full, refuses to go,
the white sheet staring back tauntingly,
loneliness in the room beating me down,
nothing is not it does not mean to be,

the doors ajar, the curtain restless,
the muse is silent,

you have chosen not to come.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Pia Andersson 29 October 2006

i agree - a very well written poem! i love the rhythm the excellent title the words you are piausing and the way you express sadness through a pen Excellent! ! wishing you a joyful day-

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Preeti - is here! 18 October 2006

I liked the fact that you left the lines incomplete, its a few sudden things. very well written though! Preets

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Prasanna Kumari 28 September 2006

perhaps that is the pain of creation.you have written it very well.good poem.i enjoyed it

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Anjana Aravind 14 September 2006

Yes, this does happen occassionally... You expressed it so nicely. Anjana

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John Tiong Chunghoo 12 September 2006

i could feel it udit. floating curtain alone thinking of a tanka

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