Cretan Maineiac

Rookie - 2 Points (April 29,1961 / Lewiston, ME USA)

You’ll See - Poem by Cretan Maineiac

The pine tree rained needles
and ants
upon the Somali and me,
........................
........................
read full text »


Comments about You’ll See by Cretan Maineiac

  • Rookie - 19 Points Emancipation Planz (6/10/2008 7:19:00 PM)

    I saw... twas not for me to interpret your deliberations... just the acceptance to listen to what has been written.. keep Righting them One Peace at a time.. Deana
    PS....misfits among everyman... heeheehee...
    this belongs on the 4ham..... (Report) Reply

    1 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • Rookie - 39 Points Malini Kadir (2/29/2008 7:17:00 AM)

    Wow...loved this write of yours! ....these lines especially........
    Wave after wave, like Programmed
    ululations
    on vinyl, way BEYOND THIS POINT

    at a speed yet to be defined, even in Arabic numbers,
    &
    played backwards. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Elysabeth Faslund (7/13/2007 2:10:00 PM)

    The wellness ones stay with the merchandise, guarding the dust and radon...titters like the fire that rolled over Alexandria! Tongue-in-cheek images of amazing, memorable proportions! How true those images/statements are! Your song of rebellion is steel-strong, current, past, and future! Love this and everyone should read this one! ! ! Great! ! xxElysabeth (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Anna Russell (5/19/2007 4:45:00 PM)

    Ooh, a strong write here. Very potent. A lot of fantastic lines, but I especially loved the land before Time, or People...very clever (and damn, I wish I'd thought of it!)
    Hugs
    Anna xxx (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Declan McHenry (3/19/2007 2:09:00 PM)

    Now that is a grand write. Excellent piece. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Herbert Nehrlich1 (1/31/2007 6:09:00 PM)

    An intriguing poem, refreshing and allowing me, the reader, to interpret it MY WAY.
    Great. There is a discipline in this and a feeling of the writer's confidence reminding me of the man going out in public with a new and controversial suit (purple perhaps?) and feeling supremely in command. I will now read more of yours.
    Best
    H (Report) Reply








[Hata Bildir]