You Made Me Know Poem by Nishi Kumari

You Made Me Know

Rating: 4.2


I was the unfolded mystery of unknown words
You came and assigned the meaning to it
I was a stranger wandering around so lonely
You came and made me acquainted to myself
I was an uncherished song swinging around here and there
You came and made me realize how beautiful it is
I was a sadonist staring myself as the fading fumes of a candle
You came and made me embrace with the lustrous light of it
I was the incomplete end of the sweetest story ever told
You came and made me knew that the end does not exist
I was lost in a world of my heartily imaginations and dreams
You came and made me believe that they are meant to be real for me
I was a tiny bud afraid to blossom in this barbaric city
You came and made me feel chivalric and free
I was the one, who used to look at the sky as a white space
You came and made me see how curious and colorful it is

Thursday, January 1, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Fabrizio Frosini 01 January 2015

[I was a *sadonist* staring myself as the fading fumes of a candle] : this is a very lyrical image... ...but I don't catch your meaning for *sadonist*... my fault.. Can you explain? Thanks

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Gangadharan Nair Pulingat 01 January 2015

I think it is a love poem......

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Unos Isin 11 June 2016

And now I am the one who is lost..

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Edward Kofi Louis 28 March 2016

Unfolded mystery! Thanks for sharing.

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Nishi Kumari 12 June 2016

Thank you....for reading

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Rahman Henry 15 October 2015

'I was the one, who used to look at the sky as a white space You came and made me see how curious and colorful it is' ... a pleasure reading.

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Nishi Kumari 13 March 2016

Thank you for your comments

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Sekharan Pookkat 10 January 2015

Looking into the white sky it may be changed into white blue or pale yellow then into red hot disappears and see the darkness behind sir

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Colonel Muhamad Khalid Khan 01 January 2015

I was a tiny bud afraid to blossom in this barbaric city You came and made me feel chivalric and free Beautifully written love poem full of feelings. Well done Keep it up Col Muhammad Khalid Khan

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