You & Me Poem by rajnish jena

You & Me

Rating: 4.8


You like me and i like you
but its unexpressable that how much i like you,
the foods may not the liking of me liked by you
but i will love always as much as you,
controversies may make a battle field for me and you
but our understanding will create the love in me and you
the way i like the thing may not be suitable for you
but our faith will adjust the love percentage between me and you
the way of thinking may be vary from you
but my destiny will be always you you and you
love you

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Romeo Della Valle 03 July 2011

Excellent, well penned and poignant write which shows to me that you have what it takes to make it through the Poetry World: TALENT! Keep it up! 10+++ Love and Peace for always!

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Ashely Jensen 01 February 2010

This one is also very good i like how deep you bring it. I like how you make it personal to the reader. I have a couple of new ones up and i have to add three more but if you could read them and let me know what you think that would be great. Be honest. Ashley

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