Ankur Thakur

Rookie (13-10-1994 / Samastipur & New Delhi)

You Me And Your Teddy In Between - Poem by Ankur Thakur

I am alone,
Sitting in my cold room,
Badly I wish you too to be here,
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Comments about You Me And Your Teddy In Between by Ankur Thakur

  • Veteran Poet - 1,244 Points Unwritten Soul (8/14/2013 11:44:00 AM)

    I think this will make that teddy bear also feel like it has soul by experienced it together with you two_SOul (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Anamika Jalan (7/29/2013 6:20:00 AM)

    SUNDAY night and the park policemen tell each other it
    is dark as a stack of black cats on Lake Michigan.
    A big picnic boat comes home to Chicago from the peach
    farms of Saugatuck.
    Hundreds of electric bulbs break the night's darkness, a
    flock of red and yellow birds with wings at a standstill.
    Running along the deck railings are festoons and leaping
    in curves are loops of light from prow and stern
    to the tall smokestacks.
    Over the hoarse crunch of waves at my pier comes a
    hoarse answer in the rhythmic oompa of the brasses
    playing a Polish folk-song for the home-comers. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 42 Points Adheez Van Der Beanthz (7/27/2013 6:52:00 AM)

    beautiful description of love, emotions play a very real
    wonderful poem (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 379 Points Leaking Pen (7/24/2013 7:22:00 PM)

    And who said Romantic Poetry is Dead
    Dear
    Ankur
    I love this poem, it speaks of innocence far removed from our society, you brought back the essence of what true love should be like...the caring, the listening, the magic touch you have so much wisdom in your poem for being a young soul...I truly admire and respect what you are about
    Truly
    Paul (Leaking Pen) (Report) Reply








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