You Messed It Up Bad, It Was Sooo Cute! Poem by Chuy Amante
You Messed It Up Bad, It Was Sooo Cute!
for all you did
I appreciate YOU
you diligently tried
to get things just right
I noticed all the ways
you attempted and re-attempted
wow, you were trying to please me
could I ever be so blind
as to not see your care and effort?
But let's call a spade a spade
and look at the hand you played
and the huge mess you made
you really screwed this up
and I love you for that pup,
you are soooo cute!
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4/25/2024 7:36:17 AM # 1.0.0.1119
You identified love as the topic, and it's a curious, quirky, utterly infectious kind of love being celebrated. You don't narrate any specific scene or activity so I can't comment or appraise the nature of your response. But what I like is your sleight of hand in both informing someone they have failed (always a thankless job) and encouraging them to keep trying. The lightness of touch you display in both the negative and positive comments is perfectly pitched.