You Never Knew Poem by Hannah

You Never Knew

Rating: 5.0


Your soft eyes melted away my heart,
You thought I was creepy because of my art,
The way you smiled when you talked about her,
Everything but you was a blur,
You were so shy at first,
Watching you chase someone else was the worst,
I looked forward to the classes I had with you,
And when you were away sick I felt so blue,
But you didn't know. You never knew.

Saturday, April 21, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: crush
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jazib Kamalvi 22 April 2018

Write comment. A good start, Hannah. Read my poem, Love and Iust. Thanks

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Chinedu Dike 21 April 2018

A nice creation on infatuation embellished in poetic rhyme and rhythm. Very heartfelt with strong emotions. Thanks for sharing Hannah and do remain enriched.

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Arthur 21 April 2018

Woow, Hannah such a great poem. I loved the beginning of it. I think you could work on it. It will be an awesome construction

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Rini Shibu 21 April 2018

A beautiful piece about your crush..

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