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You Promised Me

She whispers charms to the wind
From the second floor's fire escape

Her heart has been broken so many times
and now once more.

His soul dances in the aurora borealis
and is challenged, he can no longer
be more, all is, born as all is.

He made and kept eye contact
She looked at him with no change.
He remembers it so strange,
Hey! , Hey!

Star's fire flickers faintly for a faithless heart.
So cold their breath upon my face.
Their kiss feathers faultlessly upon my lips.

Ten good reasons to stay alive?
To the rose that feeds the bee,
steals the heart away...
Remember?

You are deeper than skin,
You promised me.

Submitted: Sunday, October 13, 2013
Edited: Friday, October 25, 2013


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  • Tiku . (12/29/2013 9:16:00 AM)

    This is beautiful ink really.liked it.

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  • Aria Siren (10/29/2013 11:41:00 AM)

    Love this. The pain is chilling and real. Really enjoyed the style and flow.

  • Heather Wilkins (10/20/2013 11:27:00 AM)

    excellent. I love the read of this one.

  • Noreen Carden (10/15/2013 6:57:00 PM)

    A beautifully written piece i am envious of your way with words well done

  • Laurie X3 (10/13/2013 7:46:00 PM)

    Maybe she couldn't pull away from his stare.....unspoken promises....what an ache they create.... A truth between two.....of course she remembers....bet she stares at the night sky looking for him...

  • Dave Walker (10/13/2013 4:10:00 PM)

    A promise is a powerful thing, A really great poem.

  • Heather Wilkins (10/13/2013 3:51:00 PM)

    a beautiful poem. Star's fire flickers faintly for a faithless heart so cold their breath upon my face. their kiss feathers faintly upon my lips. lovely

  • Tirupathi Chandrupatla (10/13/2013 9:56:00 AM)

    To the rose that feeds the bee,
    steals the heart away...
    Love has no boundaries - from nectar in the flower to aurora borealis. Amazingly beautiful poem. Thank you.

  • * Sunprincess * (10/13/2013 12:50:00 AM)

    oh midnights voice, all I can say is Wow...this is excellent poetry!

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