You Retreated Poem by V P Mahur
You Retreated
You came again
Tip toed into my heart
You broke the promise
Not to make a dart
Into my numb soul
You entered again
Into the lake of my eyes
You forgot your words
That you estimated my love
To be a game foul
You laughed again
Into the silence of my soul
You retreated your resolution
Not to give me
Even your worst scowl
Now you will see
That I am not the first one
To break the words
I will follow you as well
and I never forget your
Loveful bowl
The first 3 stanzas are very pessimistic but the last one is bold and optimistic where you display your determination. Good write.
The first three stanzas are very pessimistic but the last stanza that tells of your determination is really an optimistic. good write.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/18/2024 7:02:48 PM # 1.0.0.1119
again a very nice work mr.mahur please come and again read my new poems-when and i pray for a scene and leave your fascinating veiws overthere