You Said Poem by Jessica Taylor

You Said



You said forever but you lied
You said hello but meant goodbye
You said I'll love you till i die
but once again you told a lie
You said I'll never make you cry
but thats more than the second lie
You said I'll never leave you babe
but you were gone that very day
You've told so many lies to me
So now its time for me to leave
Your mind, Your thoughts, Everything!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jessica Jemima 23 April 2008

Great rhymes. Great contrasts. A sad poem... but it's often sadness that gives us so much to write about, isn't it? Keep writing =)

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Greenwolfe 1962 30 March 2008

The lies of love are many, The truth of love is one. But if you don't have any, No living has been done. GW62

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