God! make my embrace as warm as you wish reshma!
You say,
'Make my embrace as warm as u wish'
I hold you close and give you a kiss
You say,
'Make my kiss as hot as you wish'
I kiss you deep, and make you feverish
You say,
'Make my love as deep as you wish'
I take you in and it is pure bliss
You say,
'Make my life as complete as you wish'
I give you joy and wipe away your anguish
You say,
'Make my soul as free as you wish'
I give you my love, true and lavish
Like waves in full moon Your love overflows Into my embrace Like a drunken night And the early hangover When you recede From my arms On your knees To fall back For the shores Of my embrace Are unending
Hi Reshma. Your words flow wonderfully well done. Regards Dave T.
Essence of a poem is the soul Rhymes and meters makes it whole Theme of a poem is the sentiment Assonance and dissonance is the advent Well written
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A neat love poem with good rhyming. The addressee is the most fortunate.