You Say, Poem by Reshma Ramesh

You Say,

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God! make my embrace as warm as you wish reshma!

You say,
'Make my embrace as warm as u wish'
I hold you close and give you a kiss
You say,
'Make my kiss as hot as you wish'
I kiss you deep, and make you feverish
You say,
'Make my love as deep as you wish'
I take you in and it is pure bliss
You say,
'Make my life as complete as you wish'
I give you joy and wipe away your anguish
You say,
'Make my soul as free as you wish'
I give you my love, true and lavish

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 10 October 2008

A neat love poem with good rhyming. The addressee is the most fortunate.

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Sadiqullah Khan 10 October 2008

Like waves in full moon Your love overflows Into my embrace Like a drunken night And the early hangover When you recede From my arms On your knees To fall back For the shores Of my embrace Are unending

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David Threadgold 10 October 2008

Hi Reshma. Your words flow wonderfully well done. Regards Dave T.

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Mittur Ramprasad 27 October 2008

Essence of a poem is the soul Rhymes and meters makes it whole Theme of a poem is the sentiment Assonance and dissonance is the advent Well written

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Ashraful Musaddeq 18 October 2008

A nice rhythmic poem. Lovely,10 added.

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Leela Devi 15 October 2008

kaamaaal ke.......wonderful

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Sadiqullah Khan 11 October 2008

Amazingly beautiful poetry reshma, , , , , ,10 +

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Sarwar Chowdhury 10 October 2008

Mind-bloooooooooowing! excellent.......10++

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Reshma Ramesh

Reshma Ramesh

Bangalore, India
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