You Suck Poem by Brooke Peterson

You Suck

Rating: 3.8


I don't know if I miss
what wasn't there.
Or if it's the fact
that you never cared.

I feel like a part of me
is gone.
As it turns out,
it was never there all along.

Just want to let you know
You SUCK
and that's what you get
for falling in Love ♥

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Christine Schmidt 20 November 2009

I liked the spunk in this one and the last stanza is perfectly expressed. Good title, draws readers in-nice job.

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Kim Robin Edwards 02 November 2009

Yes Brooke! Everybody in the whole world SUCKS! Except for me.........

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