You Were Poem by Dónall Dempsey

You Were

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You were
a surprisingly lovely flower
coming up somehow through
the cracked pavement of
your pain.
One wouldn’t have
expected anything

to have come from
such... beginnings.
So
not only were you
beautiful
but amazing.

You weren’t to be
explained
And we were...
(just glad that)
...you were.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Scarlett Treat 23 August 2007

How well you seem to know and understand the heart of love.............and to be able as well to transcribe those feelings into words...........is a gift from God. Thank you for sharing your heart with me.....RED

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Dee Dee Wright 18 August 2007

You are a surprisingly lovely poet...this is so tender and touching. I'm glad that you are and that you are the kind of poet you are. Dee Dee

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Lauren Watkins 13 August 2007

this is beautiful, I love the last stanza

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Dónall Dempsey

Dónall Dempsey

Curragh Camp, Co. Kildare, Eire.
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