....You Would Still Be Mine Poem by Eyan Desir

....You Would Still Be Mine

Rating: 4.9


Moments of regret
Days of emptiness
Nights of loneliness
Keeps filling my heart
A man needs his lover
Roses need water
Babies need a mother
If I watered you right
If I made a wish
Turn back the hands of time
Bring back the joy I had
If I said the words
If I said them right
If I drank the juice
From your sugar lips
Wet your rosy cheeks
With a gentle kiss
Touch, squeeze, hug you tight
Hold you all night
Stared you dead in the eyes
Ate your forbidden fruit
Said the words I love you
You would still be mine

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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tok Ngah 13 May 2009

human are just human never learn to hold tight

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Lalitha iyer 13 May 2009

Written beautifully........................

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Hazem Al Jaber 13 May 2009

beautiful and its really completely to its meanings.. thanks for sharing.. hazem

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Ency Bearis 13 May 2009

very nice..great write...................

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Perfect in every way Eyan. I admire your grasp of English grammar and I felt the longing in your heart to be with her again. Lovely poem. 10 Karin

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Noha El3wdy 23 May 2009

Certainly she would nice

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a beautiful poem.passionately written......

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Jack Price 14 May 2009

NIce clean poem Eyan you left just enough for the imagination. I like this very much. nice free verse. thanks for the invite.

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Dawn Big Crow 14 May 2009

I Like it.....its sweet and romantic!

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Catrina Heart 14 May 2009

Such lovely written poem here..............Thanks! ! ! ! ! !

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